Shining Disires

by Jacklyn   Aug 23, 2006


Shining Desires

Outside
finding true peace
Beneath the shining stars
fire dances, desiring
freedom

CINQUAIN - Is a short, un-rhymed poem that consists of 22 syllables distributed into 2, 4, 6, 8, 2 lines.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was a great Cinquain. Nice imagry too.

    Two minor things though..

    Benieth = Beneath

    disiring = Desiring

    ..Just need to fix those up, and wha-la. It's awesome! Keep it up!

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Hey! i really like the word choice and mood of this poem, you just have a couple spelling things: disire= desire and benieth = beneath. great cinquian!

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