Wowee-- Lovely sonnet! Nice imagry, too! I thought your rhymes were great also, they all flowed nicely together. Great job! Keep it up. 5/5

Natalie``

Great Sonnet. i haven't made one of these yet but you did a beautiful job with it. it's a good poem to enter into the contest! i like the ending as well. great job.

~Jacklyn

Lovely sonnet. A true tribute to the passing summer, in antisipation of the coming fall. But we do so want to hold on to the summer, don't we.

Excellent imagery and great flow