Hey everyone... i'm new here so it would be nice if someone could rate this please ;)

That is good.....you r a great poet....

Omg! that amazing i love it its so touching and who ever you love is very lucky to have a guy like you.
you have amazing poems there outstanding
xoxroxy

This is like...rele truee...lol 5/5

This poem is so touching... And not too young indeed fits the meaning.
You love the girl who is impossible to get... How typical. Liked the poem the whole way thorugh. Altough the stanzas were a bit long, it went good with the meaning and the flow.
Amazing job, keep it up! 5/5