by Thomas Aug 23, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Every night I try to dream, as I lie awake in my bed, |
That is a beautiful poem! I couldn't of wrote it better myself. Keep up the good work! |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
I use to be able to relate to this poem but,I am one of the people who have "loved and lost".I was with the guy for 2 years && out of the blue,he broke up with me.I have some poems like this when we were still together && now it hurts to read them.I just don't understand how everything could go from just great to him breaking up with me...anyways off of that && more about your poem.The word choice was fabulous && the flow was smooth.It was well written && a great read.5/5 |
I thought this poem was very very fantastic lol cant think of a word great job 5/5 especially liked that last stanza`s last two lines GREAT! |
That is good....i loved it.....i can relate to it.... |