I like the message of this poem very much so, and I can relate to it. I'll be 18, July 18th. And I remember as a little girl thinking "I can't wait until I am 18, I can do whatever I want, whenever, and I can move out"..But now I think about it, and I say "Ugh, I want to be a kid again, where I don't have any worries, except to remember to feed the dog and such. lol"..It isn't what it's all cracked up to be. But such as life. I enjoyed this poem. Continue writing. =)
-Ally