by Darien Aug 23, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
The Perfect Crime |
by Liz
OMG THAT WAS AMAZING IDK WHAT ELSE TO SAY!!! |
by Mousie
Awww that was sooo cute! i loved it, i thought it had wonderful flow, and great vocab.... you do an exceptional job on your poems 5/5 |
by Carmen
Wow, that was amazing. i love how you can relate crime and love, its so perfect. i loved it. beautiful. 5/5 |
by Allison
I liked it, but it didn't have much of a rhythem or a flow. I liked the setting. 5/5 |
by *Charisma*
WOW! What a beautiful poem. My jaw dropped at the conclusion! Just amazing! |