Hey hey! this was a really nice job! I loved how you'd sectioned it into stanza. so many people don't do that these day's and it makes me dizzy lol... I also loved your theme. it's not that easy to write about but u did it really nicely :) keep it up!

Ruthie xoxo

The rich brown earth was soft beneath my feet
what other traceller had walked this path?
had they too felt natures power shiver through theyre body?

I say cut that last line, I don't think you need it. we've gotten the picture of natures power earlier in the poem, you don't need to state it. saying too much.

with every trees creak and every birds tune
i heard it

Cut out the and and leave the poem off with I heard it, take out the natures ancient song line

more powerful ending with just I heard it

LOVE some of the images, and the short simple stanzas, your clear but then metephorical too which is good.

good, good, good

thats all I could think of that might help ya

I like it

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