Your view point is there, but there are questions in the poem that need to be resolved, for example, who is Z, what was it in the z that made you so happy?, know what i mean, but the basics are there, keep trying!
~jose~

Its whats on the inside that counts not the color of the skin. I work in a residential program, I know about group homes. I know its not easy but it will end someday and you will be on your own, thats not easy either but you do make your own decisions.I would very much like for you to read my poem "Danny" I`m very sorry about your mom. Drugs are horrible things destroying lives.Be strong.