Ruined

by StabbedByTears   Aug 23, 2006


Life Is Ruined
My Heart has Broke

Tears are welling I may choke

You stabbed my heart with along sharp knife,
I wish you had only killed me once not twice.

Now I'm Sobbing
My eyes are throbbing

I dont think you can make it worse

I may slit my wrists
I will never get kissed

My Blood will poor
My tears will uproar.

Now I dying on the cold, hard floor.

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  • 18 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Hmm... i see your point, The drama is there, is a good poem, not excellent, good though, but you said i *may* slit my wrists, and tyhen at the end it sounds like you did, it a very questionable poem, you should edit this and fix these problems,, in score, i give it a 4.0, make more poems!!!!
    ~jose~

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