by myshiningstar14 Aug 23, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
**this is another song i wrote for my johnny. I obviously can't sing it on here but here are the words. Enjoy.** |
by Tripp
You got a 5 on this from me just because of the emotion...your rhyme and rhythm got a little effed in places, but the sincere emotion and feeling throughout the entire poem made up for it. I've felt the same way about Becky...happy almost 7 months :). I've been with Becky since May 21st 2005. Figure 15 months haha. |
by angel eyes
Omgsh! that is such a great poem. it made me cry. keep up the good work. who knows maybe you will get better than me. lol |