Omgsh! that is such a great poem. it made me cry. keep up the good work. who knows maybe you will get better than me. lol

You got a 5 on this from me just because of the emotion...your rhyme and rhythm got a little effed in places, but the sincere emotion and feeling throughout the entire poem made up for it. I've felt the same way about Becky...happy almost 7 months :). I've been with Becky since May 21st 2005. Figure 15 months haha.

Again, very heartfelt poem, and I can definitely identify with it.