This is cool hon. keep writing

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Dont you wish that this happend to guys....ATLEAST once in a while???

This is good...good job

Very nice (use same advice on the other two poems.) Keep up the work.
5/5 God Bless

~*Tay*~

Great poem. i can relate in a way. its kinda like your taking some of the words rite out of my mouth. keep up the great work