Why i am here

by *Wishes do come true*   Aug 23, 2006


Sitting here in a room full of laughter
to bad I'm not there but be there i would rather
sitting in a dark deserted place
no lives to touch no faces to see
don't know about you but i know bout me
sitting in a closed, dark dimension
with no love, no emotions, no affection
give me love
give me hope
and show me the right direction
give me your heart
and my life won't be so apart
I feel so lonely
as though I'm the only
one and only
in this trapped little room
where everyone assumes
I'm apart of the "Laughter"

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni

    This poem was difficult for me to read. There were a few of your lines that I found hard to interpret. "to bad I'm not there but be there i would rather" the word choice made it difficut for the poem to flow normallly. The poem's meaning however, was lovely.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    I feel so lonely
    as though I'm the only
    one and only
    in this trapped little room
    where everyone assumes
    I'm apart of the "Laughter"

    EXCELLENT!!! Those lines were amazing! This piece was so heartfelt...I LOVED IT.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    I feel so lonely
    as though I'm the only
    one and only
    in this trapped little room
    where everyone assumes
    I'm apart of the "Laughter"

    EXCELLENT!!! Those lines were amazing! This piece was so heartfelt...I LOVED IT.

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Now this is the talent I'm talking about... very nicely written and strong with emotion.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem by you, i really do enjoy every word of your poems.
    you are a great poet and your poems are full of emotions, wonder, and meanings
    keep up the best job and hope to read new poems by you
    take care

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