Good poem, flows wel, very well written
keep it up :)

Gud poem

I like it. Very creative in my opinion. Keep up the great work.

Another great poem by you, i really do enjoy every word of your poems.
you are a great poet and your poems are full of emotions, wonder, and meanings
keep up the best job and hope to read new poems by you
take care

Now this is the talent I'm talking about... very nicely written and strong with emotion.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I feel so lonely
as though I'm the only
one and only
in this trapped little room
where everyone assumes
I'm apart of the "Laughter"

EXCELLENT!!! Those lines were amazing! This piece was so heartfelt...I LOVED IT.

I feel so lonely
as though I'm the only
one and only
in this trapped little room
where everyone assumes
I'm apart of the "Laughter"

EXCELLENT!!! Those lines were amazing! This piece was so heartfelt...I LOVED IT.

This poem was difficult for me to read. There were a few of your lines that I found hard to interpret. "to bad I'm not there but be there i would rather" the word choice made it difficut for the poem to flow normallly. The poem's meaning however, was lovely.