Wow... this is a very powerful and emotional poem, but you wrote it well, i could feel the sadness and anger in this character.. erm.. just some help;
i think you should read over it.. coz where you mean to write ' you's because of the grammer they make it look all funny such as 'youA///A?/!A ' And also in the third stanza.. you need to add a gap in between the third stanze and the chours, like you did on the first part.. no critiques.. just some help.. other than that, it was an amazing write. keep it up..
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Kirsty Palmer xXx

YOU STOLE THE WORDS RIGHT OUT OF MY MOUTH(not literally) but dang thats so close to me your awsome keep writing