by *Wishes do come true* Aug 23, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
What kind of father are you to abandoned your daughter |
by Tricky Daze
I hate this kind of fathers,goddamn them,your poem is great |
by LadyPearl
Very strong poem. Great show of independence. I hope things will be better for you. |
by Jenni
Now that's a poem with power. I can feel the anger and disappointment with your choice of words. Very well written. Keep up the good work! |
Yet again, a very good venting poem, but I didn't like the broken format; it just ruins your talent. |
by Robie Lincer
Thats another nice poem! more like a letter than a poem! but yet very good wriiten! |