A Mothers Love

by Deana   Aug 23, 2006


She walked quietly along the road
Covered with red clay and stones
Trees dropping their branches like
an umbrella
keeping her almost dry,as she drudged on ,
feeling alone.

The branch of the creek was high
She would cross on the rocks
The child in her arms slept, dead weight
She thought of dinner,it must be six o`clock

She refused to think of what the doctor
had said
she wouldn`t face the pain
her heart grew more determined
as she wiped away the rain.

She would get another opinion
She couldn`t live with this one
He said take her home ,treat her good
Her life is almost done.

She was just a young girl
Living a womans life
Filled with fear and disappointment
So much pain and strife

The hill she had to climb
Loomed not far ahead
At the top of the hill
Was home and a downy bed.

Years later.she`d climbed her mountains
She`d saved her child
She bore the pain
Praying all the while

To a mothers love
Nothing can compare
I think I faintly heard her sing
Amazing Grace up there.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    Excellent, 5/5 :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    I can't pput words together to discride the way i feel after reading this poem it's so touching to me and every one that reads this...your poems are so full full of emotion it comes off of the page and hits me like a brick wall.
    i love all of your poems there sad but positve...by the time i finsh reading one of your poems it feels like i have just a little bit more of hope thta things will get better :)
    auna

  • 18 years ago

    by StMario

    Made me think about my mother... I loved her so much, that once was is now memory that I carry everyday.

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful sad poem you penned here, so touching yet beautiful emotions...

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea Campbell

    Deana,

    you always give me goosebumps with your words. this poem again, gave me a vision. you are so gifted. thank you for commenting on mine. it is always appreciated. great job!!!

    chelsea

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