Deana,

you always give me goosebumps with your words. this poem again, gave me a vision. you are so gifted. thank you for commenting on mine. it is always appreciated. great job!!!

chelsea

Beautiful sad poem you penned here, so touching yet beautiful emotions...

Made me think about my mother... I loved her so much, that once was is now memory that I carry everyday.

I can't pput words together to discride the way i feel after reading this poem it's so touching to me and every one that reads this...your poems are so full full of emotion it comes off of the page and hits me like a brick wall.
i love all of your poems there sad but positve...by the time i finsh reading one of your poems it feels like i have just a little bit more of hope thta things will get better :)
auna

Excellent, 5/5 :D