Thats a lovely poem! loved it!

i love the part you wrote,

"Love is what you feel when she walks in the room.
Love is how you feel as you dance under the moon." loved it!

5/5 always keep it up!

Wow,this is a very powerful poem...yet it's heartfelf...the way you put your words together made a story...great job
5/5..this poem was amazing
auna

I really love ur poem.............i could really relate to somethings u say..
keep it up!!! 5/5

Aww this is a sweet yet sad poem. great write.

sophie:)

ps. thanx 4 the comment!

Hey thisa was really good. it sounded really sweet then it ended sad. very well written. thank u heaps for ur comment on my poem meant alot =] xx

Amazing write, very cute and heartfelt
5/5. This really is true..

I have read your kind words on anothers poem..... my last loveds page :( .... her words are touching and deep yet she knows now what it is to feel crushed and cheated, what she did to me he did to her, i feel for her and you are right
"Love is what I have for you.
Love is what leaves me here so blue"
but i will add to this stanza that love is a double edged sword it can save your life or leave you bleading and asking why? a beautifull poem i give you 99/5 :)

Nice one

Wow i love this poem you write such great love poems
keep up the great work :-)