by Dani Aug 24, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Light the last candle as a symbol of your life |
by Dai
Wow that’s all I have to say lol. Great poem. |
Hye good poem! flow was pretty good all the way through to the end, but the last stanza got abit confusing, but over all really awsome poem!!! well done :] |
by Chrissie
I love it hun! So much emotion in just one poem. Great detail. Love the candle part. Hehe. Your an excellent writer. Xx Chrissie |
Wow it left me speechless!! Well written, full of emotion!! Great poem! |
Loved it, I write with that structure alot keep it up |