by Amberinaa Aug 24, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
He takes his sweet time |
by Deana
Very simply put and beautiful! I enjoy the story of your write, the imagery was very vivid, an excellent piece. |
This is really good and touching |
Really powerful message. i liked the meaninga nd the flow. it all worked really well. thanks for ur kind comment on my poem. it meant a lot : D |
by Raychil
This really is one of your best. I loved the message and the way you wrote it. It was beautifully sad, yet it had a lesson. It was amazing, Amber. I hope you start writing more again. |
by Deana
THis is one of your best Amber, the rhyme is perfect and the message is so important. |