by Weeping Wolf Aug 24, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
Looking down at the clouds |
I can relate to this as I'm only a couple hours from Chicago and have been there many times.I prefer the small city life of Dixon, but Chicago has such a history, like New York and Los Angeles.Sometimes a change of scenery brings a change of self. |
by JL
Different write. I like the refrain. Its interesting because it starts out optimistic but has a sad undertone, especially with the ending. only one thing the 3rd to last line says "cold" but i think its supposed to be "could" other than that, its great. XXXXX |