Darling,my heart is wounded because of you

by Sweet lig   Aug 24, 2006


Why you came into my life
If you only hurt my innocent heart?
You smash it with no doubt!
Heart breaks into pieces
It spread with wounds...
Heart is bleeding and it hurts
Never know how it heals...
I let my heart to fall in love with you
With out knowing your whole life through!
This is the biggest mistakes I've done!

I absolutely regretting...
Your love for me is so unreal!
My wounded heart hardly to accept
Coz my heart beats only for you
And you just ignored and leave some pain
Now, heart stops beating!
Till become so numb

i love you but....
My heart is wounded because of you
darling...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hannah

    Mm another outstanding job.. i love it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Omg, this is such a sad poem. Great word usage, and the flow was just amazing. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Omg, this is such a sad poem. Great word usage, and the flow was just amazing. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aww this is sad :( the emotions in this poem can really be felt. I hope you're okay now. Anyway It was a good poem. well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    You work your emotion so well into your words. I have nothing to critique here. i didn't catch anything wrong with this. i really like this part:

    Heart is bleeding and it hurts
    Never know how it heals...

    I can kinda relate to this. i love how your worded it

    Great Job

    5/5

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