by Misstress
I feel the emotions on the poems.. |
by Jenni Marie
Very sad, a moving piece. |
by Blissful
This was filled with emotion and depth but there were many mistakes. I think you should read through this one and correct your mistakes. |
You work your emotion so well into your words. I have nothing to critique here. i didn't catch anything wrong with this. i really like this part: |
by Marc Ortiz
Aww this is sad :( the emotions in this poem can really be felt. I hope you're okay now. Anyway It was a good poem. well done. |
Omg, this is such a sad poem. Great word usage, and the flow was just amazing. 5/5 |
Omg, this is such a sad poem. Great word usage, and the flow was just amazing. 5/5 |
by Hannah
Mm another outstanding job.. i love it 5/5 |