Comments : Darling,my heart is wounded because of you

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    I feel the emotions on the poems..
    Very nice..
    You could Capitalized all the first letter and "I"...
    but its okey though.
    Keep on writing on what you like..
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Very sad, a moving piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    This was filled with emotion and depth but there were many mistakes. I think you should read through this one and correct your mistakes.

    "Tuncay...
    Why you came into my life"
    ^that sentence makes more sense if it was "why did you come into my life"

    There were more mistakes like tha. Therefore I gave it a *4/5*

    "I absolutely regretting...
    Your love for me is so unreal'
    ^I think you mean "I'm"

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    You work your emotion so well into your words. I have nothing to critique here. i didn't catch anything wrong with this. i really like this part:

    Heart is bleeding and it hurts
    Never know how it heals...

    I can kinda relate to this. i love how your worded it

    Great Job

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aww this is sad :( the emotions in this poem can really be felt. I hope you're okay now. Anyway It was a good poem. well done.

  • Omg, this is such a sad poem. Great word usage, and the flow was just amazing. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • Omg, this is such a sad poem. Great word usage, and the flow was just amazing. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Hannah

    Mm another outstanding job.. i love it 5/5