And you can't wash away the stain,
((Take away the 'And'..It flows better))

I really liked this... Usually I dislike poems about war or even romotely close to war, but I really enjoyed reading this. You had wonderful flow and a great story to tell...Excellent job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wow im loving this one Kt. on a certian someone we are studying in History no doubt... nice!!1
5/5
u deserve it
cya
xoxo