Battel

by Georgia   Aug 24, 2006


Fall
Hope
Break

Reach
Miss
Shatter

Walk
Stumble
Collapse

Try
Fail
Up

Hesitate
Stop
Die

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Not good @ all but about my constant battle to find a new goal or aim...but if i stop i die...
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  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Wow, so simple but strong words:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Short and to the point, as a soldier i can tell you thats how it is, nice work :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Me

    I do! Her names rachel. I love her! Shes always here for me! Im glad you had a good time!!! I dont think this poem sucks at all!!!1

  • 18 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    I really like how it's different...i really like it 5/5.....and thanks for ur comment it means alot thanks..... keep up the good work
    auna

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