It was really good i didnt really get how the girl died. i maen i know she slit her wrists but did her boyfriend match her do it? and was her boyfriend alive when the reaper came and slit his wrists! well whatever it was still kick ass so i gave you a 5

Wow. that gave me serious chills. the descrpitions were amazing. good job. write more.

Omfg this is amazing you're an amazing writer keep up the good work

my verdict def.5/5