Very well written. great j0b l0ved it =]

Very, very beautiful sonnet. It makes me want to go out and try to write one, as well. The only criticism I have though, is that there may be too many and unwanted commas in most of the lines. Unless it's supposed to be like that. But either way, luscious poem, and I enjoyed it very much!

I have never attempted to write sonnets..
This one is a perfect example of it.

God Bless!

Beautiful poem. Very sweet and heartfelt.

-Luna-

5/5

I really like it but I was distracted by all the commas.
poems without punctuation can make a writer look lazy or stupid, but too much punctuation can ruion a poem. you've got something to say and the meaning is blurred by to many commas. if you rethought your punctuation and put more work into what you want to say i could probably hear it. but with all the punctuation there are some parts of this poem i just cant understand.

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This was a sonnet worthy of a muse, it had a smooth flow throughout and had some clever lines. nicely done.