hi Craig! finally you are back! been hungry for your works! of all your writings that i've read, somehow this one sounded more personal... maybe it's because that's the way i write. i'm not sure how to comment on this. everything ties in and flow so well... i like how you constantly reaffirm the girl that everything's gonna be alrite, and starting each verse with o' angel. thot Angel would be a lovely title too. it just gets better... :)

haha... just realised that i like this so much too because of the closet rhymer in me! the words are so lyrical i think you should try putting it into a song...

What can I even begin to say about this?? wow...wowwwwwww. It is sooo beautiful. Angel? wowwww. I know III would be glad to move closer and hold your hand tight...this poem is soo amazing. Why I had to wait to read it I'll never know. DAMN BLOODY OCEAN!!!! You are one terrific bloke, Craiger...and have become a wonderful friend to me..I hope we always will be. This poem is phenomenal..will tell you more in our chats on yahoo...I am so touched by it and truly impressed at your poetic words here..I will try to believe them as I have been in this situation a few times..I always seem to fall into the wrong situations.. :( Thank you sooo much from the bottom of my heart for writing this..I'm stunned..Luv Michelle ;)xxx

I am in love with this poem... :)

WOW

you never stop surpriseing
have you ever thourt of publishing your work you would certainly make money.
what can i say that i havent said before,
i carnt praise you enough on your talents and your master pieces
they are unique and real i love them
every day i log in and i click on your name hopeing to see a new poem
i carnt thank you enough for your comments on my poems they mean so much to me as i respect you as a writter and your opinon is very valueable to me.
keep doing what your doing
all my love
lorna
xxx ps my e-mail is stardust.girl@ntlworld.com
it would be great to hear from you craig
take care
lorns

ya know... this is a very cool poem... I love how it flows.... your choice of words is perfection! It's sometimes hard to do that with big words...but you do it so awesomely!

Craig, I just read this poem for the umpteenth time...and OMG..it's sooo great..then I read your comments again as I came here...and I said hope we'll always be friends..welllll....guess you're always, ALWAYS gonna be my best friend..and my husband..now aren't you? You're the best baby...writing this for me when I was feeling a bit down...you're so perfect, and all mine..I love you with all my heart baby...xxxMich