Without you everything falls apart

by Landon Carter   Aug 24, 2006


Without you... life will still go on
But there will be no story in it

Without you... the night will go on
But I will not be able to sleep

Without you... many questions will arise in the heart
But there will be no answers

The destinations light seems to be dim
There is the dampness of the dew on the flowers
The lamps will be lacking light
If you are not with me

Without you... sound is tuneless
You are the song I sing
You are the light of the moon
You are the support in storms
You are the shining star in the sky

Without you... I am like a body without a soul
In the path no matter who I am with
As the tears blur my vision blind
I fall since I am lost in your dreams
In the midst of thousands of names I look for just your name

You\'re the air that I breathe
You are the sound of these moments
You are the illumination, my inspiration
You are the shore, you are my destination
You are the only to stop my tears
You are the only one the only one I\'ll ever love
You are my baby, My Love
The happiness of the heart, the thirst of the heart

You are my everything
Without you I am nothing
I love you so much...
I love you till eternity
If you can come then come, this heart is saying this to your heart

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  • 18 years ago

    by Savanna Elaine

    I am in love with this poem. So much emotion and thoughtfulness, the way you worded everything. PERFECT!

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Without you... life will still go on
    But there will be no story in it
    ((I -Loved- these lines...))
    Without you... many questions will arise in the heart
    But there will be no answers
    ((And these...))

    This poem is one of your best that I've read so far. You spoke with such emotion in it and it really told a great story. The only thing I disliked was how it didn't really seem to flow. Nicely done, though.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was pretty good.. The love was very clear and expressed well.. The descriptions were lacking a little but still nice.. And the flow was okay.. Keep it up, 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥s|a|r|a|h♥

    Great poem, very intense emotion, 6/5 loved it

    sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    Great Poem! loved the emotion in this!
    This flowed very well
    The opening stanza captured me and the ending was perfect! loved it! 5/5
    keep it Up
    And
    Keep smiling

    Much Love
    A.Pathetic.Mistake