Nice poem with very emotion in it,
well done.

Great Poem! loved the emotion in this!
This flowed very well
The opening stanza captured me and the ending was perfect! loved it! 5/5
keep it Up
And
Keep smiling

Much Love
A.Pathetic.Mistake

Great poem, very intense emotion, 6/5 loved it

sarah

This was pretty good.. The love was very clear and expressed well.. The descriptions were lacking a little but still nice.. And the flow was okay.. Keep it up, 4/5

Without you... life will still go on
But there will be no story in it
((I -Loved- these lines...))
Without you... many questions will arise in the heart
But there will be no answers
((And these...))

This poem is one of your best that I've read so far. You spoke with such emotion in it and it really told a great story. The only thing I disliked was how it didn't really seem to flow. Nicely done, though.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I am in love with this poem. So much emotion and thoughtfulness, the way you worded everything. PERFECT!