by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG Aug 24, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
**Another one for the club, i will be working on a lot more of these to improve, it was fun to do, i suggest others try it, they are a great exercise, and though they're frustrating, i had a blast making it. ** |
by *Charisma*
Very nice...an older piece, and I can see how much your writing has grown. It's amazing! I'm glad you kept on writing and trying because you are by far one of the best poets on this site. With just my own opinions, there isn't much to critique on your work. |