Divorce

by Tyler   Aug 25, 2006


Mom and dad they fight
they make me so uptight
paranoid and confused they are
for what other reason would he leave and go to the bar
for what other reason would she drive away in the car forever
I think this is going ot get better
because mom and dad they don't fight anymore
they just switch me back and forth as a result of their stupid divorce

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Well, at least you let out your feelings in this.. The flow wasn't very good as some of your lines were too long.. Also, some of the words you used clashed with others and made it difficult to read.. I feel that you could have made this deeper.. It is just stating the facts.. Why don't you add some emotion in? Nice job though 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by hesXmyXrainbow

    Thx for your vote/comment watever you left....., i think yours is really good yay for you!!! ~bambi~

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylor

    Thanks for the comment and excellent poem! my parents are like that too *bleh*

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    THAT`S REALLY GOOD;; iT`S SAD! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

    x3-------SHELBY

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Its really original, good use of rhyme, its subtle and I like how the sentence length varies. Good job.

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