Good poem. I really liked this part:

"I am all alone, trying to find my way to the fame
When I realize, life is just a game
Some win, some lose, but everyone is a human, everyone is the same "

You've got the idea. The rhyme scheme is pretty good. I liked it. I can relate. I've had similar feelings in the past. Good job. Keep it up.

Love it love it love it
~sarah~

Heya lina, I liked this a lot. It was an original and interesting style it needs a little proof reading for spelling and punctuation but all in all a very good poem. 4.5/5

For a poem with a few typos, it was very good quality. I related to it because just recently I have been thinking a lot about life, how it has no rules, or that it has too many laws... oh well, it gave words to my empty thoughts.
By the way, welcome to p & q :-)

//T.L.//

I don't know why someone didn't give you a 5/5 because this is one of the best poems I've read in my life. Mine don't even come close to this. I really like that your poems rhyme I kindof don't have any interest in the ones that don't. Good poem!!!