hey! are you writing every second of every minute? do the words just flow to you? i am amazed! this has got to be my favourite right now! been searching for a title eh? hehe, yes, i think this last one "thoughts on life" suits it better. it really does express all the little thots and questions we have about life. love every bit of it! (except maybe the airplane taking flight part...) :)

no not at all..I just left a comment on your poem and changed this line..not sure it's any better tho!!! What happened to your last poem?? It was good! Singapore, huh? Hmmm

I loved this poem a lot, it definitely makes you think about things....carry on. T.S.

You know you really are good at writing poems because I'm sure it's like almost every day I come on here and see you've added a new poem (promise I'll get through them) It's just the fact that they're not rubbish poems making up the numbers. There was your special rhyming poem, 1st and 3rd, 2nd and 4th lines, which I think is really dificult to write but hich you wrote in a matter of days. Then there is this 'observations' poem which makes a lot of sense when you think about it. I think I've read another but I will read more, well done, K

Thank you guys, so much!!! Every one of your opinions means so much to me...especially you that are here listed...and Tommy, you are new to me but I love your poems...Chris...you CAN write at LEAST as good as me, give me a break already!!! And Timmy..well what you said was just so sweet...lawrence you are fast becoming someone whos comments I look forward to reading because you are always so darn complimentary!! Thanks again for making me feel good!!! :) luv Michelle

Kevin..I forgot, I'm so sorry!!! :) You also..another hilarious poet, and don't worry..take your time, I won't stone you if you don't get thru em all..hahaha Luv Michelle

As everyone else has said, this poem was amazing! I think everyone at one point in time has asked themselves these very questions. This poem was simply brilliant...you have got a lot of talent! Kudos