Despair in Her Eyes

by King of The Elements   Aug 25, 2006


No matter what i do i always let you down with no rhyme or reason yet i see you filled with doubt

I try and try with all my might not to let you get hurt but it seems like God's Will for me to do just that

For all the times that I say I'm sorry i guess now it mean nothing cause i said it to much

Like day goes to night i see disappointment in her lovely, clear eyes
In hers me so deep inside that i think she might feel it to

All i want is to make her happy yet how can i when she doesn't tell me anything she likes or how she feels

I wish to make her happy no matter the cost or time now when i see her again i will tell her this one time i love more than you'll ever know and hopes she believes it

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  • 17 years ago

    by Destiny Marie Babyy

    Hey Drayden.....i just wanted to coment on th poems u have made....they are so good baby, you have no idea, but i love you and incase u didnt kno this is dessie....ur girlfriend still, i hope right.....i love you

  • 18 years ago

    by Savanha

    OMG Drake! You are amazing... and i doubt that she could ever see any disappointment. Cuz you are the sweetest guy I have ever met, and you're just so amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Christie

    Wow. what can i say??? an excellent poem. =D so touching and powerful, i love it. 5/5 from me.
    keep writing,
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Rosie

    Awww... this is probley the sweetest thing i have ever heard anybody say at least in a long time and mean it. i wish the boy i love,"Justin" loved me as much as what u'r poem says about u. i love him to death i would do anything for him, who knows i probley would DIE for him. well anyways enough about that. i think this is a GREAT POEM. i give u a 10/10. keep up the great work!!!

    sign, Rosie

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    I was touched, u really x-pressed your self here. It was heart breaking! But definetely a gr8t poem! keep it up!
    ^_^ Peace out!

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