Silent Death

by The Lonely Rose   Aug 25, 2006


Poison vial in my hands
Thoughts flowed through my mind...
I thought
This is my time
I can't take it this life anymore
Why did everyone turn against me?
Why did everyone that i love hates me now?
Now i will leave.
From this world,
This lifetime,
Screw love
Who ever loved me
NONE!!
Who ever caught me
NONE!!!
I uncorked the vial
and took a final look around me
Now let me leave from this place
And drank every single drop of poison
I grow weak,
I can't breathe
I know that I'll be leaving soon.
I lie on the floor,
Waiting,
Waiting for my life to pass me by,
My final thoughts are,
You were my friends, boyfriend and family
why did you betray me
now my life is gone and i am falling to the depths of hell
It was my Silent Death

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  • 17 years ago

    by Broken Ballerina

    I loved this poem it was very well done 5/5
    ~Jess

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    Powerful words. Lovely poem...

    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    Great poem.
    You did a great job in writing it.

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Wonderful poem. i think u did a great job on this. but let me mention something.
    "I can't take it this life anymore"
    you can take out the "it" because that messes up the flow of the line and isnt very good grammer.

    "Why did everyone that i love hates me now?"
    you can change it to "why did everyone i love hate me now?"

    but its your choice. i think this poem was over all really great. keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Oh my gosh! this is so sad...It made me cry almost never think about taking your life thats scary stuff I'm always here even though you don;t know me someones always here for you..

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