Untittled

by Sweet lig   Aug 25, 2006




When no one seems to listen...
When no one seems to care...
Just always remember that
Whenever a tear falls
down your cheek!

I will wipe it
For you
Hug u tight
And whisper....

Ssssh....its OK
I'm still here

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow, this is short, sweet, and simple. Great word usage and flow was just amazing. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    I LOVED THIS!

    It was so simple and sweet that it worked perfectly together. Amazing job on this one ... it has to be my fave from you. It was short sweet and to the point while it held such meaning and power in each line. Well done *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by lish

    This is absoutly amazing poem, it is now im my favourites, i love the way you made a short and simple poem express so much feeling and emotion.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Very unique and interesting poem. Form of this piece is excellent and original. This poem is also very touching and emotions are expressed greatly. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this one is so beautiful! I like it from the beginning to the end. The wording and the atmosphere in this piece are superb.
    Well done, you deserve more then 5/5

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