Forever in love

by Colossus   Aug 25, 2006


The sun is shining brightly
and here you are beside me
one arm hanging loosely
the other one around me
with love in your eyes
and care in your hands
you hold on to me tightly
cause I'm your superman

the sun is shining dimly
your still here beside me
one arm hanging loosely
the other one around me
with love in my eyes
and care in my hands
i wrap my arms around you
cause your my superwoman

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  • 17 years ago

    by Alma

    Really sweet
    I liked your thing you put in about superman n woman
    it's simple but it says it all
    loved it!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Alma

    Really sweet
    I liked your thing you put in about superman n woman
    it's simple but it says it all
    loved it!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Viktoria

    VERY nice, it is very short, but explains everything in just few words....
    I love it, keep writing hun..
    VikKI

  • 18 years ago

    by ABrookeD

    Aww..very sweet. I liked it a lot. Keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Superman,
    I thought this was a pretty cool twist on this one. Once again...great job!
    Jules

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