by Maddy Aug 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Which one do i pick |
by Jessica
Awh, this was good.. I loved the imagery that your words contained.. Great descriptions and emotion.. You really felt how badly you wanted to feel pain.. There are a few spelling and grammer mistakes that you should fix up though.. |
That was awesome! |
by xXxemzxXx
Sick as poem man |
It's good. a bit too short, tho i reckon. but i gave u a five cos i thought it was good. take care xx |