by *Daniel94* Aug 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Little did he know |
by Jane Lowe
Thank you for your coment. :) |
This is the beginning of something amazing! |
by Maree
Great poem... wow you are getting good. |
by HOLLY ARMER
This is the beginning of what I'm sure will be an outstanding poem. Perfect flow and such an intriguing subject, I look forward to more....Holly |
by Lovely Bones
This is a very good poem. You have a special talent for writing so don't ever stop! The descriptions were very nice and all the stanzas flowed very well into each other. Great job! |