by Marissa Aug 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You say |
I love your poem, they are all quite nice, i will be sure to keep reading |
by Jessica
Awhh.. That was soo sad.. I felt that you could have made this a little deeper by not just saying what you said to eachother.. Maybe add in how you felt when he said those things.. Anyway, nice job, keep it up! 5/5 |
by *Daniel94*
This is great, at least you dont suck anymore, just joking, thax for commenting, bye. |
This poem is really easy to relate to. good job. |