This poem is really easy to relate to. good job.

This is great, at least you dont suck anymore, just joking, thax for commenting, bye.

Awhh.. That was soo sad.. I felt that you could have made this a little deeper by not just saying what you said to eachother.. Maybe add in how you felt when he said those things.. Anyway, nice job, keep it up! 5/5

I love your poem, they are all quite nice, i will be sure to keep reading