I really like this one..really expression..i also could tell that these people really loved each other..

I really liked this poem.. especially the end stanza I thought it ended the poem brilliantly.. although very sad.. it flowed brilliantly.. just one little thing wrong with it and that's the word 'of' in the 5th stanza, should be 'off'.. but other than that brilliant 5/5 xx

Great poem mel, keep it up... maybe we can IM some time, do u have myspace or msn?
keep in touch,
Sarah