Please help

by Haven   Aug 25, 2006


You tell me to stop,
You don't know why I do it in the first place
And you tell me to stop. Wouldn't it be better
to ask why and try to help me through it?

Why don't you try to see it from my point of view?
Why can't you try to help me instead?

This is the easy way,
When I feel down.
This is a pain I can control
This is a pain I can handle,
This pain is on the outside
The pain inside is ten times worse,
That's why I do it.
I want to stop, but the way back is hard,
I can't do it alone.
Please stay with me

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  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow i can totally relate to this poem. I know the pain you speak of and i like how you explained it. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    Ehh this wasnt all that good cause you didnt say what you are doing. i think its about cutting? but im not sure. i think you can add more to it and it will make it better, but other then that it is a good poem and very sad too 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kie

    It alright y so much pain

  • 18 years ago

    by AshLetitia

    Wonderful, I can see your emotions conveyed accuratly and was enlightened by your wording.
    Good job.
    Ash

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is a another sad poem!
    yet you penned it so well!

    keep it up!

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