First, I want to know why people haven't even left one comment on this poem. It is totally amazing. My mouth dropped open when I finished it. it says that 62 people viewed it so why didn't they comment?

Your poetry is beautiful

The rose on your pillow, the thorns in your bed
When you sleep tonight, they pierce through your head,
The sweet sting of romance.
((I LOVED this line!))
And your patchwork pieces won't hold together
((Take out the And...))

Otherwise, this is an absolutely amazing poem discribing a breakup (or that's what I got out of it). I would never have thought to do such, and it's just amazing. Great write.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5