AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
it really has a rythme. i can relate to this. the second last verse made me think. the ending is perfect. i lov it:)

Great job, perfect way to end the poem.

One word (well know it is more ut who cares!) DEPRESSING!

Hey
i think you put alot of emotion into this one its really good i know how you feel except i dont get called emo i get called crazy legs coz im disabled if you wanna get to know me emai me at lyndsay_kelly666@hotmail.com

Awww! So sad!!! Its really emotianal. I really like that about this poem. The emotian. The ending is awesome! 5/5 keep it up! :)

Typo-- 'sucidial' should be 'suicidal'

Other than that, the poem is very, very good. It expresses your meaning well, and has good rhythm. Sad, though.

5/5

IS THIS POEM TRUE? IT'S SOO GOOD. VERY WELL EXPRESSED. :)

5/5

This poem is the BOMB!!! i loved it!!!5/5!!!!