by Kristina Aug 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Every time you smile, |
by Ellie
Again, very bittersweet. Rhythm was decently intact, nice job. >. |
by LadyPearl
Pretty good, just try to expand your vocab.^-^ |
by Megann Lee
Awhe, that is really sad. I thought the flow was wonderful, and the meaning of the poem was good. Great Work. |