Behind some bedroom doors

by leah   Aug 25, 2006


Moon light
shone bright
on this special night
horses prancing
fairies dancing
on this special night
the stars were singing
the fairy folk blinging
on this special night
excited girl runs upstairs
finally fairys came true like in her prayers
on this special night
she bangs open the door
only to see an empty floor
on this special night
only for her to realise
she was to late
fairy world was gone

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sophie

    That was a really sweet poem (until the end..coz the fairies left :) i liked the repetative line ..well done !

    sophie:)

    p.s i wuld love if u could chek out a few of my poem and comment, i will certainly do the same for u.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kidd

    I am not going to be a hypocrite but u need to check this poem again ok. You have the talent and there was no sign of you expressing yourself fully in it.It was done fairly,but you can do better,I know it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Marcus

    That was very nice...this shows that you have an imagination and I like that....

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