That was very nice...this shows that you have an imagination and I like that....

I am not going to be a hypocrite but u need to check this poem again ok. You have the talent and there was no sign of you expressing yourself fully in it.It was done fairly,but you can do better,I know it.

That was a really sweet poem (until the end..coz the fairies left :) i liked the repetative line ..well done !

sophie:)

p.s i wuld love if u could chek out a few of my poem and comment, i will certainly do the same for u.